It need some work
Configure her Voicebank a bit more
dont add soo much vibrato
iff you need anymore help on configuring your Utau
http://purutau.blogspot.com/2011/01/h ow-to-addedit-flagsbre-etc-in-utau.ht ml
hope this helps c:
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